Tuesday, January 28, 2014

To love him in his sounds

It still feels
like a song, even when
it is not

even when it's
a laughter, or silence, or
the sound of

a busy street
my feet won't touch, he
wants to share.

5 comments:

  1. Love him in his sounds ... yes.

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  2. you've become a lune-tic now, haven't you? :)

    something about that final line - a busy street / my feet won't touch ~

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  3. A sweet love poem. I'm glad to see you write this.

    I've decided to become one of your groupies (something I seldom do but something about your poetry touches me that way) Now you have 11!

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    1. Do you mean I'm not always this sweet, Mr. Stormcat? lol

      I'm honored to have you following me around. Hope you never stop being touched by the things you see here.

      <3

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  4. This form is simultaneously soothing enticing. You manage to use just the right words to convey an intimacy.

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