Sunday, February 9, 2014

To clothe a man with a poem

Go under his skin
and find out what

keeps him naked
on under-zero days.

It's an idea.
Wear it like your own.

It's his road,
resting upon his bare shoulders.

Believe it
before you need hands,

or eyes.

11 comments:

  1. This is beautiful and wise, and says everything about a love poem that I wish I could have written as simply and cleanly as you have,

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  2. It's his road,
    resting upon his bare shoulders. - amazing image!

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  3. The idea! I LIKE THAT.

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  4. It's only a idea. Perhaps may not turn out to be trouble! Nicely Kenia!

    Hank

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  5. This is just beautiful!

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  6. Very cool write, love it.

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  7. An intriguing poem. I like "it's an idea. Wear it like your own."

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  8. I most appreciate the admonition of belief before needs demand.

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  9. "It's his road" Love that line! Very great poem! Thanks for sharing :)

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  10. elegant and spare, Kenia ~

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