made up my mind not to lie about love.
if there is freedom in defining it
if there is freedom in feeling it
if love can be the freedom to leave
your own body to live in someone else's
i'm keeping my nonlinear memories
of being around you
of being inside you
of being meaningful
at some point.
This is gorgeous, Kenia. The last stanza is divine!Bravo!
ReplyDeleteThat "at some point" not only puts the point on the exclamation but also acknowledges that freedom could be larger, meaning could be larger than a single moment. But what a moment! Perhaps the best moment when two are one. Very fine poem.
ReplyDeleteOutstanding work, Kenia.
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