He
said
a prayer
asking for
the waiting not to
be long, but he had no return.
(Found Poetry Review Oulipost 4 asked of us to write a Fib with a variation that was so hard to write I failed it, so I'm sticking to the regular Fib, couting syllables in honor of the math in the challenge.)
(Source article: The boy who jumped beyond, in The Hindu)
Sigh.. A sum of the human condition in 6 lines.
ReplyDeletehmmn, how long did this take? it's really... eloquent. so far, I've got a lot of poorly placed pronouns and prepositions. sigh. this is so good.
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