wears a faded brown shirt,
a window seat
and a ponytail,
but never a smile.
He checks
my shoes,
my hands
and tattoos,
but never my eyes.
This man on the bus
carries a doubt,
a subway ticket
and a fault,
but never a cry.
He owns
a picture frame,
a yard and
a name,
but never a heart.
(Written for the State College of Florida Swampscribes prompt for NaPoWriMo day 1)
Excellent! I love how the character sketch develops through each additional detail added stanza by stanza. The poetic voice is very compassionate in the face of such a bitter personality.
ReplyDeletewow..strong and intense.
ReplyDeleteso well observed ~
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