tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6513996779520996885.post2062546103030338109..comments2023-06-21T08:32:31.823-03:00Comments on An exercise on existing: if I cried tonight, what would it be about?Kenia Santoshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12893148474912410033noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6513996779520996885.post-29421745683702365202014-02-26T16:04:44.796-03:002014-02-26T16:04:44.796-03:00Very beautifully wistful.Very beautifully wistful.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6513996779520996885.post-82923547617909410902014-02-24T23:26:14.184-03:002014-02-24T23:26:14.184-03:00I live the title. Seems like sometimes tears need ...I live the title. Seems like sometimes tears need to flow. These are all tender and worthy reasons. <br />I truly enjoyed this read. cosmos camihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09558327124451076957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6513996779520996885.post-9675045142769914262014-02-24T21:43:44.475-03:002014-02-24T21:43:44.475-03:00I can't a favorite verse, each is strong. but ...I can't a favorite verse, each is strong. but those final conversations, the ones I have in my head... ~Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6513996779520996885.post-61231498865629810792014-02-24T18:41:34.582-03:002014-02-24T18:41:34.582-03:00the sweet ones and the ones who rock your world......the sweet ones and the ones who rock your world... are all part of the mosaic of life...revelationshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07184644795582553870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6513996779520996885.post-48816334204357881892014-02-24T18:30:56.252-03:002014-02-24T18:30:56.252-03:00I think this is wonderful. The near-rhymes are jus...I think this is wonderful. The near-rhymes are just as effective as precise rhymes, even more so because they convey accurate meaning. Well done, Kenia.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12460881702249079009noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6513996779520996885.post-62156122010403797292014-02-24T17:39:57.596-03:002014-02-24T17:39:57.596-03:00this is a wonderful write in all it's sweetnes...this is a wonderful write in all it's sweetness and regrets.. the sorrow of life can have the softness of black velvet.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6513996779520996885.post-11125295819563770532014-02-24T15:32:48.249-03:002014-02-24T15:32:48.249-03:00Beautifully written.Beautifully written.Laurahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15349928247626849914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6513996779520996885.post-7612768545386638742014-02-24T15:30:55.998-03:002014-02-24T15:30:55.998-03:00Very cool write!Very cool write!Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6513996779520996885.post-64246670782811573062014-02-24T15:19:51.563-03:002014-02-24T15:19:51.563-03:00I agree with Kerry's comment...you use the rhy...I agree with Kerry's comment...you use the rhyme and the inherent brevity to lead us through this work. It retains a lightness of approach that contrasts so with the content. A great dynamic if it can be done right, as it's done here. Very nice job.<br />Steve K.Steve Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04818671944215117618noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6513996779520996885.post-51245679295055075802014-02-24T11:52:19.814-03:002014-02-24T11:52:19.814-03:00I think you have a wonderfully light touch with th...I think you have a wonderfully light touch with the rhymes of this poem. They seemed to lift the end of each line and impel the reader on to the next - it is very lyrical and introspective.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6513996779520996885.post-55302186575887020822014-02-24T10:32:29.677-03:002014-02-24T10:32:29.677-03:00of the people we meet:
those who were mild and swe...of the people we meet:<br />those who were mild and sweet<br />or those who shook my world?<br /><br />How true! They come in various types and sizes and can sure influence us. It's a question of meeting their challenges and not to let them shake our world. Wonderful write Kernia!<br /><br />Hankkaykualahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03240206222973305395noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6513996779520996885.post-716037836663539842014-02-24T10:10:06.868-03:002014-02-24T10:10:06.868-03:00This really resonated with me, love that second st...This really resonated with me, love that second stanza.Kathryn Dychehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17175563748388497142noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6513996779520996885.post-80189561816035139502014-02-24T09:37:43.250-03:002014-02-24T09:37:43.250-03:00It's a mystery to me where the strength to bea...It's a mystery to me where the strength to bear you comes from. lol<br /><br />Love you too. :*Kenia Santoshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12893148474912410033noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6513996779520996885.post-28997589401827926562014-02-24T08:38:23.786-03:002014-02-24T08:38:23.786-03:00rhyme, ew. Just joking.
the one put on hold.
the ...rhyme, ew. Just joking.<br /><br />the one put on hold.<br />the words you successfully bleed,<br />the ones you'd chase, fool's gold.<br /><br />Love you.Marlon O.https://www.blogger.com/profile/09954438534259148725noreply@blogger.com