tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6513996779520996885.post186806248197445443..comments2023-06-21T08:32:31.823-03:00Comments on An exercise on existing: Kensi 'n' Tom - Swimming in the sky Kenia Santoshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12893148474912410033noreply@blogger.comBlogger18125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6513996779520996885.post-90016013056959440582015-01-15T13:55:31.848-02:002015-01-15T13:55:31.848-02:00What a clever idea! Very good. We often don't ...What a clever idea! Very good. We often don't say what we mean or hear what is said. I love words following like vapor.Yvonne Osbornehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18212188414972694795noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6513996779520996885.post-11432372564150479952015-01-15T02:39:07.825-02:002015-01-15T02:39:07.825-02:00I've read this a few times already, and will n...I've read this a few times already, and will no doubt be back to read it - and listen - again...<br />What a wonderful entry. Archer's Boneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15507043334472692421noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6513996779520996885.post-91474502345065212432015-01-14T14:44:17.899-02:002015-01-14T14:44:17.899-02:00This a beautiful collaboration in poetry and spoke...This a beautiful collaboration in poetry and spoken word...oh, an in art! I love the last stanza in The Writer.Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6513996779520996885.post-57030317977723852472015-01-14T12:22:16.052-02:002015-01-14T12:22:16.052-02:00Love your voices--a definite addition to the fine ...Love your voices--a definite addition to the fine poetry! Love the caughing in the two ditties befoe "the reader." LOVE "The Reader." (I first read "means of REproach. It's a good thing I read it again!)Susanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05723639294340760325noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6513996779520996885.post-89367776041858797372015-01-13T21:29:05.760-02:002015-01-13T21:29:05.760-02:00You are so good....I really loved these. I also en...You are so good....I really loved these. I also enjoyed listening to the spoken word versions, splendidly read. Yeah....just love it. The collaborative effort paid off in spades.Herotomosthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11486093602914824276noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6513996779520996885.post-73084974318249525392015-01-13T21:20:48.865-02:002015-01-13T21:20:48.865-02:00OMG This is really creative (and romantic!)OMG This is really creative (and romantic!)Leehttp://www.twitter.com/elianaleenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6513996779520996885.post-43609464421012362852015-01-13T17:43:19.236-02:002015-01-13T17:43:19.236-02:00awesome write; each phase as intriguing as the one...awesome write; each phase as intriguing as the one before, i luv the use of images to show the helplessness of the communicator<br /><br />much love...<br />Gillena Coxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09191865405561549074noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6513996779520996885.post-7090582966387447602015-01-13T15:07:01.007-02:002015-01-13T15:07:01.007-02:00Fascinating and simply brilliant!Fascinating and simply brilliant!Helenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16619199535376925989noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6513996779520996885.post-26302949079470428042015-01-13T14:25:18.059-02:002015-01-13T14:25:18.059-02:00Wow , what a collaboration ... kudosWow , what a collaboration ... kudosSuyashJhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06332045821743367072noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6513996779520996885.post-40606747956253409512015-01-13T12:16:10.837-02:002015-01-13T12:16:10.837-02:00Brendan, thanks for a lovely comment as usual. TB ...Brendan, thanks for a lovely comment as usual. TB is the one who works all the magic, he's got a very special way with words, I try mostly not to ruin his rhyming patterns. <br /><br />:)<br /><br />I do love the conversations we have. Kenia Santoshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12893148474912410033noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6513996779520996885.post-53315947840789714202015-01-13T12:00:02.780-02:002015-01-13T12:00:02.780-02:00Seeing this, i believe that true love can exist. T...Seeing this, i believe that true love can exist. Thanks for it Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12042821231076807762noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6513996779520996885.post-71302864879303082942015-01-13T11:51:01.247-02:002015-01-13T11:51:01.247-02:00"He knows what I don't say." What a ..."He knows what I don't say." What a perfect line! Love these poems!Lolamousehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12508347229501155001noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6513996779520996885.post-85861685335005800122015-01-13T11:29:05.677-02:002015-01-13T11:29:05.677-02:00Well this seemed like the collaborations of lovers...Well this seemed like the collaborations of lovers rather than fellow poets to me-- and poetry as a means of communication-- it seems to have worked ! Thanks, Kenia. Karin at http ://Manicddaily.wordpress.comOutlawyerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15698845661756444061noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6513996779520996885.post-51455893584493010362015-01-13T10:26:23.275-02:002015-01-13T10:26:23.275-02:00Collaboration, writing partnerships and group supp...Collaboration, writing partnerships and group support has always been fundamental to poetic endeavour. It is heartening to see it at work here. The rapport between poets is very touching.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6513996779520996885.post-38984254353961072292015-01-13T10:24:41.469-02:002015-01-13T10:24:41.469-02:00"She is
Trapped in a poem."
Those two l..."She is<br />Trapped in a poem."<br /><br />Those two lines popped out... Maybe because of the duality of their meaning. To be trapped in a piece of writing can be a wonderful thing, or a terrifying one... depending on the piece.<br /><br />Lovely. Magaly Guerrerohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18295455026184103230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6513996779520996885.post-26581016716078133422015-01-13T07:45:05.146-02:002015-01-13T07:45:05.146-02:00With only what's posted here, I read wonderful...With only what's posted here, I read wonderful collaboration and conversation, and it's possible with only words and a few images and sounds. Fascinating how mind and mind intermingle and twine. But "not all of a sudden," yes. And never well enough -- I mean, we do have to write the next poem ... Loved this.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6513996779520996885.post-66860381124154223212015-01-13T05:35:58.953-02:002015-01-13T05:35:58.953-02:00I love collaboration.. what a wonderful poem you h...I love collaboration.. what a wonderful poem you have created together, the reading and writing are both needed to make poetry.brudberghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12563403553536472377noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6513996779520996885.post-21399373827123955402015-01-13T04:56:05.877-02:002015-01-13T04:56:05.877-02:00Isn't it an amazing thing that simple words ca...Isn't it an amazing thing that simple words can bring others together closer than one would ever picture.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12590129774774754740noreply@blogger.com